I haven't been on NGs for a while and I came back to see all these fancy updates and other cool things on my page, and I happened to gaze upon a fan tab. I'm sitting here thinking "oh boy I must be famous now" but alas I only had 1 and it happened to be you. So me being the person I am I came to take a look at your stuff and quite frankly I like this little experiment. I'm a big fan of the reese bass sound and I think you could go somewhere with this. But other than that, thanks for liking my stuff and keep up the good work. :) (we not-so-big people have to stick together haha)
Like where this is going. Can't wait to hear the rest
EXTREMELY choppy, painful to the ear, and just doesn't sound very good
Been waiting for one of these for a WHILE!!
Probably, no, HANDS DOWN, the best 30 min and 8 seconds of my life.
May I recommend though, getting a better organ sound. It filts well with everything towards the end, but at the beginning when it's basically alone, it sounds....not so great. Other then that nice cool/chill tune
the organ sound was kinda of an orchestral pad I've been messing with, but I'm still trying to figure out where this song came from..AHH! it freaks me out that some songs I love are so hard to find, and still remain in my little brain for such a long time.
I don't hear the "not the most piano-sounding sound" sound at all. Sounds great and is VERY relaxing. If you wanted you could go a step further and add an orchestra and make an entire ensemble, but this is fine without it. Keep up the great work!!
Eww the base
I try to hear past it but it's just to out there for me and taking control of everything else. That base u use in the very beginning and throughout the song sounds very bad. The one that hits a few notes, builds up, and just holds out (sustains) for a bit. I think it just doesn't go well with the song at all. And when it first starts it VERY crackling like from 16 seconds to 20 seconds.....all you hear is an annoying cracking sound and it's not good for this tune
its a smashed chip, its perfect for how i felt.
Nice dungeon tune until....
I liked it. It's really chill, not complex, and really soothing. It would make a pretty good cave/dungeon-maze tune. "Damn can't get out of this place, but hey, at least I got something pretty good to listen to" lol. Everything after 58 seconds was kinda random though. Not random in a sense it didn't go with the rest of the song, but random as in it changed the mood of the song for a quick moment then the song ended. I think if you add on to that last part a bit more and make it longer then it'd be cool to hear the contrast from beginning to the end of the song.....if not I think you should just leave it out or try to make the change a little less dramatic and in your face
Thank you very much!
Well, the very purpose of the last part was to make a dramatic change, and then end it. But thanks for the feedback, I'll see what I can do to try and make it better. :D
I see what you're doing here
I like the unit dong of it just not how it's put together. At first, in the beginning, it's more together, but as it progresses it starts to lose he sense of wholeness it has. I just really think there's too much going on. A better name would be "The computer has just crashed" :/
I'm still trying to get better, and will probably wind up deleting this in the next month or so.
Personally I think there's too much going on. And it's kinda misleading to call it a loop. Now if loop that part right around 31 seconds and work with that then u may have something. The base kinda kills the whole sound.....like horribly. Perfect example at 1:44. But I really like the middle of your song. It's really smooth especially from 40 seconds until, well again, when that base comes in. With some tweaking here and there I think this could come out to be a really nice soft core battle song or a running around on a map song.
Thanks for the advice :D
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